More and more college students are taking part-time jobs. Some people argue that part-time jobs take up too much time that students have no time to focus on their studies, whereas others think that doing part-time jobs should be encouraged in that students can get rich experience from the jobs. As far as I concern, I think we should encourage students to do part-time jobs for the following reasons.

越來越多的大學(xué)生去外面兼職。一些人認(rèn)為兼職占用了學(xué)生太多的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間；另一些則認(rèn)為應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生去兼職，因?yàn)樗麄兡軌驈闹蝎@取豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。就我看來，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生出去兼職，原因如下：

First of all, part-time job experience provides the opportunities for students to know about what jobs are really like and enhance their personal abilities. What’s more, such experience can help them be prepared psychologically for their future jobs. Second, the part-time jobs can enrich students’ daily life activities and help them to make more friends. If one has friends from different fields, these friends will help him with his personal development in the future. Third, taking part-time jobs can reduce the financial pressure. Many college students still ask their parents for money. This can be a heavy burden to some families. But if the students can do some part-time jobs and make money on their own, the family pressure can be relieved to some extent. Last but not least, part-time jobs can help students to find out their strengths and shortcomings. When they overcome the difficulties, they will become more confidence.

首先，兼職能提供機(jī)會讓學(xué)生們了解工作到底是怎么一回事，提高個(gè)人能力。其次，兼職也能讓他們對未來的工作做好心理準(zhǔn)備。第二，兼職能夠豐富學(xué)生們的課余生活，幫助他們結(jié)識更多的朋友。如果一個(gè)人有不同領(lǐng)域的朋友，那么，這些朋友會在他未來的個(gè)人發(fā)展中幫助他們。第三，做兼職能夠減輕經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力。許多大學(xué)生還在問家里面要生活費(fèi)。對于某些家庭來說，這也許是個(gè)很沉重的負(fù)擔(dān)。但如果大學(xué)生能出去做兼職，自己掙錢，家庭的經(jīng)濟(jì)壓力就能有所緩解了。最后一點(diǎn)，兼職能幫助大學(xué)生們找到自己的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。當(dāng)他們克服困難時(shí)，就會變得更加自信。

To sum up, doing part-time jobs has more advantages than disadvantages. The students can not live in the ivory tower forever. They will meet the challenges from this cruel world sooner or later. And doing part-time job is the first step to walk in this society.

總的來說，兼職利大于弊。學(xué)生不能永遠(yuǎn)活在自己的象牙塔里面。他們遲早都要面對來自外面殘酷世界的挑戰(zhàn)。而兼職，則是踏入這個(gè)社會的第一步。

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