出擊雅思寫作高分論述
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在文章總字數(shù)要求不變的情況下,每個段落觀點數(shù)量越多,意味著支持句的數(shù)量就可以相應地減少。如果一個段落中含有兩個觀點,那么每個觀點句展開一個支持句就滿足字數(shù)要求了。

如:Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A類)

Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)

如果一個段落只有一個觀點,在保持段落字數(shù)不變的情況下,支持句的數(shù)量就要相應地增加。

如:Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A類)

The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)

因此,在觀點較少的情況下,能否將觀點充分地展開成為滿足字數(shù)要求的關鍵所在。

其次,如何展開一個觀點,關鍵在于是否能夠靈活運用論證方式。常用的論證方式包括:解釋(explanation),延伸(extension),舉例(exemplification)和對比(contrast)等,如:

A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句為解釋論證)(《劍6》Test 4)

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句為延伸論證) (《劍5》Test 2)

To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句為舉例論證)(《劍8》Test 3)

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句為對比論證)(《劍5》Test 2)

以上就是通過幾個非常詳細的例子介紹的雅思寫作高分技巧中如何展開觀點,展開論述方面的信息,非常實用。大家在備考自己的雅思寫作考試的時候,通過一段時間的練習,就可以掌握這個技巧了。

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