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高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)新的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中提倡使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯。而以前高考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分主要是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確程度而定，因此考生在書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，也只注重不遺漏要點(diǎn)和正確使用語(yǔ)言知識(shí)（如謂語(yǔ)的時(shí)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等）這兩個(gè)方面，很少考慮或根本不考慮“使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高詞匯”，導(dǎo)致最后寫(xiě)出來(lái)的東西千篇一律，缺乏生氣，影響了自己的成績(jī)。

那么，考生怎樣才能在書(shū)面表達(dá)中避免語(yǔ)句表達(dá)單一化，寫(xiě)出好的句子來(lái)呢？本文擬結(jié)合新的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)學(xué)生書(shū)面表達(dá)中的一些語(yǔ)句作一分析，并提出一些寫(xiě)作建議，以幫助考生寫(xiě)出豐富多彩的句子出來(lái)，提高自己的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。

一、要適當(dāng)?shù)囟嗍褂靡恍┰~組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采，豐富語(yǔ)句的表現(xiàn)力。如：

【原文】She doesn’t like sports.

【修正】She cares nothing for sports.

【原文】A new railway is being built in my hometown.

【修正】A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

英語(yǔ)習(xí)語(yǔ)、詞組十分豐富，考生在自己的書(shū)面表達(dá)中，能適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠@些短語(yǔ)，無(wú)疑是一個(gè)提高水平的十分行之有效的方法。

二、盡量避免過(guò)多地重復(fù)使用的某一單詞，必要時(shí)應(yīng)選擇使用其它恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替。如：

【原文】I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

【修正】I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

【原文】We’ve built a new ClaSSroom building besides the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be.

【修正】We’ve built a new ClaSSroom building besides the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.

三、注意使用不同結(jié)構(gòu)、不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，盡量使句型多樣化，避免單調(diào)。如：

【原文】There is a new ClaSSroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side before. But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school.

【修正】On one side of the road there is a new ClaSSroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building — our library, in which you can find all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.

原文在語(yǔ)法上并沒(méi)有什么錯(cuò)誤，但由于通篇過(guò)多地使用了there be 結(jié)構(gòu)，不但使得表達(dá)的內(nèi)容顯得單調(diào)乏味，而且還給閱卷老師一種“不成熟”的感覺(jué)。我們可通過(guò)轉(zhuǎn)換句式來(lái)避免句子結(jié)構(gòu)的單一化。同一個(gè)意思，可使用不同的表達(dá)方法，這樣做既可以突出重點(diǎn)，又能豐富表達(dá)，增加文采。

四、多使用一些主從復(fù)合句來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單句，可使書(shū)面表達(dá)行文更加豐富多彩。如：

【原文】We had to go home.

【修正】All we could do was to go home.

【原文】The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much.

【修正】The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.

【原文】I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school.

【修正】The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.

五、改變句子開(kāi)頭方式，不要一味地都是主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，最后再在句末加上一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。我們可以適當(dāng)?shù)匕岩恍┏煞郑ㄈ鐮钫Z(yǔ)）提前位于句子的開(kāi)頭，使整個(gè)句子讀起來(lái)有點(diǎn)跌宕起伏，增加書(shū)面表達(dá)的表現(xiàn)力。

【原文】We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

【修正】Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

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